From 85fab774e8d9c3286cef767e0f4c93f3a6ed20b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Christoph Haas Date: Mon, 6 Aug 2018 22:58:47 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Typos and formatting --- app/views/welcome/about.slim | 54 ++++++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 30 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/views/welcome/about.slim b/app/views/welcome/about.slim index e382867..2a4487e 100644 --- a/app/views/welcome/about.slim +++ b/app/views/welcome/about.slim @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ h1 About this web site p | This is a public repository of screenshots taken from applications contained - in the Debian GNU/Linux distribution and its derivates like Ubuntu. It was + in the Debian GNU/Linux distribution and its derivatives like Ubuntu. It was created to help getting an impression of what a certain software will look like on your desktop before you install it. Everybody can take screenshots and upload them. Our admin team will just review your changes before they become @@ -29,16 +29,15 @@ ul em 'Cookies. | - Only if and when you upload a screenshot the website will send your - browser a cookie. That allows you to manage your own uploads + Only if and when you upload a screenshot the website will send your + browser a session cookie. That allows you to manage your own uploads while the cookie is valid. You can still upload screenshots even if you reject the cookie. li em 'Log files. | - - This web site is served by the nginx web server software. + This web site is served by the nginx web server software. It creates one line for every request that you make which contains the current date and time, your IP address, the URL you requested, the user agent (browser) identification string and the referer URL @@ -53,8 +52,8 @@ ul em 'Privacy. | - Under no circumstance will information about your person be - collected or processed. I am happy to have you here as my guest. + Under no circumstance will information about your person be + analysed or given to other people. I am happy to have you here as my guest. h2 What is your motivation of running this site? p @@ -121,15 +120,18 @@ p li ' http://screenshots.debian.net/thumbnail/PACKAGENAME br - ' (Returns a thumbnail (160x120 pixels or less) of a package's first found - ' screenshot. If no screenshot was found then a dummy image will be returned - ' along with the HTTP code 404.) + | + (Returns a thumbnail (160x120 pixels or less) of the package's most + recently uploaded + screenshot. If no screenshot was found then a dummy image will be returned + along with the HTTP code 404.) li ' http://screenshots.debian.net/screenshot/PACKAGENAME br - ' (Returns a screenshot (800x600 pixels or less) of a package. If no - ' screenshot was found then a dummy image will be returned along with the - ' HTTP code 404.) + | + (Returns a screenshot (800x600 pixels or less) of a package. If no + screenshot was found then a dummy image will be returned along with the + HTTP code 404.) p ' If you would like to get a complete list of packages or screenshots in JSON @@ -139,26 +141,30 @@ p li ' http://screenshots.debian.net/json/package/PACKAGENAME br - ' Returns a JSON structure containing the URLs to the thumbnails and - ' full-size images of the screenshots available on this site. + | + Returns a JSON structure containing the URLs to the thumbnails and + full-size images of the screenshots available on this site. li ' http://screenshots.debian.net/json/packages br - ' Returns a JSON structure containing information about all packages - ' but not the actual screenshots. - ' The returned object is huge so please use it sparingly. + | + Returns a JSON structure containing information about all packages + but not the actual screenshots. + The returned object is huge so please use it sparingly. li ' http://screenshots.debian.net/json/screenshots br - ' Returns a JSON structure containing informatoin about all packages - ' and one screenshot's URL each. There may be further screenshots that are - ' not included. + | + Returns a JSON structure containing informatoin about all packages + and one screenshot's URL each. There may be further screenshots that are + not included. li ' http://screenshots.debian.net/json/packages-without-screenshots br - ' Returns a JSON structure containing the names of all packages - ' that still lack screenshots. If you want to help contributing - ' then this data can be useful. + | + Returns a JSON structure containing the names of all packages + that still lack screenshots. If you want to help contributing + then this data can be useful. h2 Uploading new screenshots